Brandon vs. Caffiendo

29 May

Story developing today…  tune in tomorrow for even more of our stories and a little bird told us that Justine and Lewis M may even have a song up their sleeves! This Post is brought to you by Niamh, Emily & Yasmin.

“Caffiendo’s hot breath grazed Brandon’s rough face. Caffiendo didn’t do anything, he simply stood there, his face –if you could call it a face- was about four centimetres away from Brandon’s. Brandon gazed up at him with terror. What was he meant to do? Everything was so clear, yet everything still felt so foggy. As if nothing existed. Although, Brandon was pretty sure this was happening. But then again, no one can be too sure of their surroundings, right? Brandon’s mind felt as if it was going crazy, he was questioning himself, he was thinking of the impossible. Surely he was dreaming? There was no acceptable reason for what was going on.

Brandon was woken from his thoughts when a small bead of slobber dripped on his shoulder. He turned his head in disgust and wiped it away. His manner didn’t say so, but he was frightened. He couldn’t write himself out this one could he? Caffiendo opened his giant mouth as if he was going to devour him. Brandon’s mouth opened, but nothing came out, only a small whine from the very back of his throat. As if gravity had suddenly become stronger, he crouched down. As if that was going to stop the monster from eating him… He felt as if he was close to death. So very close. His last minutes were plain white. All he could see was white. Even with his eyes open. He scrunched his eyes closed and all he saw was darkness. Why was nothing happening? Why was the monster not eating him? It sounded silly, but that what was meant to happen, right? No.

 Brandon opened his eyes and he was in what seemed to be a completely different world. This world was made out of plain pencil drawings.  What was going on? ” Yasmin & Emily


“Brandon found himself faced with a hideous monster with small black beady eyes that could look into your soul and pull out your deepest secrets. The monster smelt strongly of coffee, his teeth had been rotted away from caffeine overload, his watery skin was a deep brown mud coffee colour. Brandon could feel his heart beat and the blood stream through his ears. He felt sick, there was a lump in his throat the size of a tennis ball, he tried to swallow, but it just made him feel even more nauseous. His eyes started to water at the smell of coffee. Was this how he was going to die? Killed by the thing he had once loved so dearly?”

Suddenly the monster collapsed, falling to the ground it started to howl as if in pain. Brandon was about to run, but found he couldn’t. He was intrigued to see what was happening to the monster. Slowly the monster was transforming into the pretty girl he had seen just a few minutes ago. The girl crumpled to the floor and started to sob. Brandon suddenly felt very awkward. He didn’t like being in this position when people cried especially when a pretty girl cried. Brandon shifted from one foot to another not sure what to do. “Um…who did this to you?” he stammered. The girl simply looked up, stared for a while, then replied, “you did last night… you created me… you created all this last night. You wrote it and it came true, you really don’t remember me?” Her eyes searched his face. Brandon thought how pretty her eyes were then realised the situation “What?! I couldn’t. I’m just a writer!”

The girl seemed unfazed by Brandon’s sudden outburst, she started talking to him really slowly as if he was a 7 year old. You thought up this whole world. We are the only people here! You woke up before you could write about anyone else…you spent hours creating this!” she blushed slightly clearly embarrassed. Brandon took it in slowly, now he really felt like a 7 year old. ” Niamh P



2 Responses to “Brandon vs. Caffiendo”

  1. justine June 1, 2012 at 12:34 pm #

    All the stories are great! I loved reading them 🙂

  2. Tomasso + Tom June 15, 2012 at 11:09 am #

    Great story. Did you have fun makeing it? I love all the questions, a great skill. well done see you again on the blog.

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